Vulberry/Change History: Difference between revisions

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* Description was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "{{Highlight|This gentle}} and endearing {{Highlight|Nexus}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|dotted}} with {{Highlight|bright red patterns like}} strawberry{{Highlight| }}jam{{Highlight|. It delights in sharing its sweetness—by hurling cakes at others.}}"

** {{Color|Old:}} "{{Highlight|This gentle}} and endearing {{Highlight|Nexus}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|dotted}} with {{Highlight|bright red patterns like}} strawberry{{Highlight| }}jam. {{Highlight|It delights in sharing its}} sweetness{{Highlight|—}}by {{Highlight|hurling}} cakes {{Highlight|at others}}."

** {{Color|New:}} "{{Highlight|Gentle}} and endearing{{Highlight|, this}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|touched}} with {{Highlight|a vivid}} strawberry{{Highlight|-}}jam {{Highlight|red.}}"

** {{Color|New:}} "{{Highlight|Gentle}} and endearing{{Highlight|, this}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|touched}} with {{Highlight|a vivid}} strawberry{{Highlight|-}}jam {{Highlight|red}}. {{Highlight|It's more than happy to share that}} sweetness{{Highlight|...}} by {{Highlight|throwing}} cakes."

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "Vulberry is {{Highlight|not good at saying no}}, which {{Highlight|makes it ill-suited to handle}} Felinoxie. Felinoxie is {{Highlight|always springing invitations to perform together, showing off their beautiful fur to humans. In truth}}, Vulberry {{Highlight|admires Felinoxie's idea from the heart-}}their {{Highlight|contrasting}} colors {{Highlight|create a striking, almost designed effect}}. {{Highlight|Yet Vulberry feels it isn't suited for public performances; it is a little too}} shy.<br>Still, {{Highlight|unwilling to disappoint}} Felinoxie, it always {{Highlight|goes}} along for a {{Highlight|short while}} before {{Highlight|quietly slipping away}}. {{Highlight|Courtesy, after all, is Vulberry's creed}}."

** {{Color|New:}} "Vulberry is {{Highlight|just too nice for its own good}}, which {{Highlight|is a huge problem when your friend is}} Felinoxie. Felinoxie is {{Highlight|constantly ambushing it with ideas like, "Let's go show everyone how awesome our fur is!" And honestly}}, Vulberry {{Highlight|agrees —}} their {{Highlight|clashing}} colors {{Highlight|are super stylish}}. {{Highlight|But it's also painfully}} shy {{Highlight|from stages}}. Still, {{Highlight|to avoid hurting}} Felinoxie{{Highlight|'s feelings}}, it always {{Highlight|plays}} along for a {{Highlight|minute or two}} before {{Highlight|making a quiet exit}}. {{Highlight|For Vulberry, being polite is more important than being comfortable}}."

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 * Description was updated:
-** {{Color|Old:}} "{{Highlight|This gentle}} and endearing {{Highlight|Nexus}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|dotted}} with {{Highlight|bright red patterns like}} strawberry{{Highlight| }}jam{{Highlight|. It delights in sharing its sweetness&mdash;by hurling cakes at others.}}"
+** {{Color|Old:}} "{{Highlight|This gentle}} and endearing {{Highlight|Nexus}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|dotted}} with {{Highlight|bright red patterns like}} strawberry{{Highlight| }}jam. {{Highlight|It delights in sharing its}} sweetness{{Highlight|&mdash;}}by {{Highlight|hurling}} cakes {{Highlight|at others}}."
-** {{Color|New:}} "{{Highlight|Gentle}} and endearing{{Highlight|, this}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|touched}} with {{Highlight|a vivid}} strawberry{{Highlight|-}}jam {{Highlight|red.}}"
+** {{Color|New:}} "{{Highlight|Gentle}} and endearing{{Highlight|, this}} Anima has fur as smooth as cream, {{Highlight|touched}} with {{Highlight|a vivid}} strawberry{{Highlight|-}}jam {{Highlight|red}}. {{Highlight|It's more than happy to share that}} sweetness{{Highlight|...}} by {{Highlight|throwing}} cakes."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Vulberry is {{Highlight|not good at saying no}}, which {{Highlight|makes it ill-suited to handle}} Felinoxie. Felinoxie is {{Highlight|always springing invitations to perform together, showing off their beautiful fur to humans. In truth}}, Vulberry {{Highlight|admires Felinoxie's idea from the heart-}}their {{Highlight|contrasting}} colors {{Highlight|create a striking, almost designed effect}}. {{Highlight|Yet Vulberry feels it isn't suited for public performances; it is a little too}} shy.<br>Still, {{Highlight|unwilling to disappoint}} Felinoxie, it always {{Highlight|goes}} along for a {{Highlight|short while}} before {{Highlight|quietly slipping away}}. {{Highlight|Courtesy, after all, is Vulberry's creed}}."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Vulberry is {{Highlight|just too nice for its own good}}, which {{Highlight|is a huge problem when your friend is}} Felinoxie. Felinoxie is {{Highlight|constantly ambushing it with ideas like, "Let's go show everyone how awesome our fur is!" And honestly}}, Vulberry {{Highlight|agrees &mdash;}} their {{Highlight|clashing}} colors {{Highlight|are super stylish}}. {{Highlight|But it's also painfully}} shy {{Highlight|from stages}}. Still, {{Highlight|to avoid hurting}} Felinoxie{{Highlight|'s feelings}}, it always {{Highlight|plays}} along for a {{Highlight|minute or two}} before {{Highlight|making a quiet exit}}. {{Highlight|For Vulberry, being polite is more important than being comfortable}}."
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