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** {{Color|Old:}} "This soft, bouncy pudding-pup Anima often gets flattened {{Highlight|under}} the pressures of life. Clever humans use this fact to give themselves a bit of a boost, bouncing high into the sky." | ** {{Color|Old:}} "This soft, bouncy pudding-pup Anima often gets flattened {{Highlight|under}} the pressures of life. Clever humans use this fact to give themselves a bit of a boost, bouncing high into the sky." | ||
** {{Color|New:}} "This soft, bouncy pudding-pup Anima often gets flattened {{Highlight|by}} the pressures of life. Clever humans use this fact to give themselves a bit of a boost, bouncing high into the sky." | ** {{Color|New:}} "This soft, bouncy pudding-pup Anima often gets flattened {{Highlight|by}} the pressures of life. Clever humans use this fact to give themselves a bit of a boost, bouncing high into the sky." | ||
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** {{Color|Old:}} "Puddlipup was confused. Eggnok often {{Highlight|shared its stories of a}} rebellious, scrappy childhood with {{Highlight|Puddlipup}}, hoping to encourage Puddlipup to be | ** {{Color|Old:}} "Puddlipup was confused. Eggnok often {{Highlight|shared its}} stories of {{Highlight|a}} rebellious, scrappy childhood with {{Highlight|Puddlipup}}, hoping to encourage Puddlipup to be tougher against those awful humans who pushed it around. "Woof?" {{Highlight|What's tough?}} But I was born all soft and squishy, wasn't I!? "Woof..." Sometimes, it did feel like humans could be {{Highlight|a little...}} too enthusiastic, and it wasn't {{Highlight|great}} at handling that {{Highlight|kind of}} attention. {{Highlight|In fact, it was even a bit introverted.}}"Woof!" Puddlipup {{Highlight|suddenly seemed to understand}} what tough meant{{Highlight|... After all, it knew some}} humans preferred hard, {{Highlight|coarse bread}}... {{Highlight|But it was born all soft and squishy, wasn't it!? Whaddaya want it to do!?}} | ||
** {{Color|New:}} "Puddlipup was confused. Eggnok {{Highlight|would}} often {{Highlight|share stories of its own}} rebellious, scrappy childhood with {{Highlight|it}}, hoping to encourage Puddlipup to be | ** {{Color|New:}} "Puddlipup was confused. Eggnok {{Highlight|would}} often {{Highlight|share}} stories of {{Highlight|its own}} rebellious, scrappy childhood with {{Highlight|it}}, hoping to encourage Puddlipup to be tougher against those awful humans who pushed it around. "Woof?" {{Highlight|Tougher?}} {{Highlight|Puddlipup looked confused.}} But I was born all soft and squishy, {{Highlight|right?}} "Woof..." Sometimes, it did feel like humans could be {{Highlight|somewhat}}... too enthusiastic, and it wasn't {{Highlight|really good}} at handling {{Highlight|such}} attention {{Highlight|as an introvert.}} "Woof!" Puddlipup seemingly understood what tough meant{{Highlight|! Some humans}} {{Highlight|like their bread}} hard {{Highlight|and crusty. Puddlipup got it.}}" | ||
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