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* Trait was changed from [[Cherubim]] to [[Mascot]]. | * Trait was changed from [[Cherubim]] to [[Mascot]]. | ||
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** {{Color|Old:}} "With a sweep of its wings, Plumelune {{highlight|can}} "Gustcall"{{highlight|—at least, that's the name humans gave it}}, a name as beautiful as the winds it stirs. {{highlight|In truth,}} studies {{highlight|suggest that at first}}, Plumelune {{highlight|never cared about the}} posture or strength of its wingbeats. {{highlight|Yet ever since}} humans coined the word "Gustcall," {{highlight|it has‐without grasping the meaning—}}subtly begun to {{highlight|weigh the power of each gust against the elegance of its stance}}. It observes, carefully, how humans praise or critique different strengths of wind in different seasons. Plumelune has, it seems, developed the delicate burdens of an idol." | |||
** {{Color|New:}} "With a sweep of its wings, Plumelune {{highlight|performs what humans call}} "Gustcall," a name as beautiful as the winds it stirs. {{highlight|Yet}} studies {{highlight|reveal that initially}}, Plumelune {{highlight|gave little thought to}} posture or strength of its wingbeats. {{highlight|It was only after}} humans coined the word "Gustcall" {{highlight|that Plumelune, though never understanding its meaning,}} subtly began to {{highlight|contemplate its every wingbeat, weighing the gust's force against the grace of its own posture}}. It observes, carefully, how humans praise or critique different strengths of wind in different seasons. Plumelune has, it seems, developed the delicate burdens of an idol." | |||
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