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** {{Color|Old:}} "A peace-loving Anima, {{Highlight|it enjoys playing}} hide-and-seek with humans. It blends into {{Highlight|its}} surroundings, {{Highlight|yet frequently reveals its presence due to its}} excessive exuberance."

** {{Color|New:}} "A peace-loving Anima {{Highlight|that likes to play}} hide-and-seek with humans. It blends into {{Highlight|the}} surroundings {{Highlight|well using its natural camouflage, but often gives itself away in moments of}} excessive exuberance."

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** {{Color|Old:}} "Olivesper freely admits to being a little obsessive: it cannot bear the sight of withered twigs littering a balcony, nor can it stand the drooping buds in a roadside flowerbed. Whenever that happens, it swishes its long, branchlike tail, coaxing the flowers and greenery to unfurl once more. In the same way, Olivesper cannot stand to see the troubled, downcast expressions on human faces. So it hides within the thick grass, quietly observing, seeking out ways to help in secret. Only then does it close its eyes contentedly, harvesting the bloom of human smiles."

** {{Color|New:}} "Olivesper is a bit of a perfectionist, and it's not sorry about it. Whether it's withered twigs on a balcony or drooping flowers in a garden bed, when it sees a sad-looking plant, and whoosh — its leafy tail fixes it. It sees a sad-looking person, and it feels the exact same way. It can't stand it. So, it hides in the nearest bush and secretly helps them out. It's a little weird, maybe, but all it wants is to see people's faces light up."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "A peace-loving Anima, {{Highlight|it enjoys playing}} hide-and-seek with humans. It blends into {{Highlight|its}} surroundings, {{Highlight|yet frequently reveals its presence due to its}} excessive exuberance."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "A peace-loving Anima {{Highlight|that likes to play}} hide-and-seek with humans. It blends into {{Highlight|the}} surroundings {{Highlight|well using its natural camouflage, but often gives itself away in moments of}} excessive exuberance."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Olivesper freely admits to being a little obsessive: it cannot bear the sight of withered twigs littering a balcony, nor can it stand the drooping buds in a roadside flowerbed. Whenever that happens, it swishes its long, branchlike tail, coaxing the flowers and greenery to unfurl once more. In the same way, Olivesper cannot stand to see the troubled, downcast expressions on human faces. So it hides within the thick grass, quietly observing, seeking out ways to help in secret. Only then does it close its eyes contentedly, harvesting the bloom of human smiles."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Olivesper is a bit of a perfectionist, and it's not sorry about it. Whether it's withered twigs on a balcony or drooping flowers in a garden bed, when it sees a sad-looking plant, and whoosh &mdash; its leafy tail fixes it. It sees a sad-looking person, and it feels the exact same way. It can't stand it. So, it hides in the nearest bush and secretly helps them out. It's a little weird, maybe, but all it wants is to see people's faces light up."
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Olivesper/Change History: Difference between revisions

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