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** {{Color|Old:}} "Even with its brows shaved into dots, this Anima of Satiation fails to appear more intimidating. It must {{highlight|constantly guard against fellow Anima taking nibbles from}} its ears and tail."

** {{Color|New:}} "Even with its brows shaved into dots, this Anima of Satiation fails to appear more intimidating. It must {{highlight|remain constantly vigilant, keeping fellow Anima from nibbling on}} its ears and tail."

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "Nomnom has never been good at dealing with overly affectionate types{{highlight|. H}}umans who rush up wanting to rub its belly and tug its ears{{highlight|... O}}r the packs of Puddlipups who swarm it the moment it looks away, lavishing licks on its tail{{highlight|—Nomnom bristles with fury. }}Surely these wretched humans and Anima must think I'm food! And yet, every so often, in the midst of deep sleep, Nomnom dreams of {{highlight|a towering}} ice cream cone sprinkled with jellybeans{{highlight|,}} rich {{highlight|in}} flavor. Unable to hold back, it bites once... and again... Then, with a howl, it wakes{{highlight|-}}only to find that the {{highlight|taste of sweetness was nothing more than}} its own tail, clutched tightly in its arms."

** {{Color|New:}} "Nomnom has never been good at dealing with overly affectionate types{{highlight|: h}}umans who rush up wanting to rub its belly and tug its ears{{highlight|; o}}r the packs of Puddlipups who swarm it the moment it looks away, lavishing licks on its tail{{highlight|. "}}Surely these wretched humans and Anima must think I'm food!{{highlight|" Nomnom bristles with fury.}} And yet, every so often, in the midst of deep sleep, Nomnom dreams of {{highlight|an}} ice cream cone sprinkled with jellybeans {{highlight|and}} rich {{highlight|with}} flavor. Unable to hold back, it bites once... and again... Then, with a howl, it wakes{{highlight|...}} only to find the {{highlight|sweet taste came from}} its own tail, clutched tightly in its arms."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Even with its brows shaved into dots, this Anima of Satiation fails to appear more intimidating. It must {{highlight|constantly guard against fellow Anima taking nibbles from}} its ears and tail."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Even with its brows shaved into dots, this Anima of Satiation fails to appear more intimidating. It must {{highlight|remain constantly vigilant, keeping fellow Anima from nibbling on}} its ears and tail."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Nomnom has never been good at dealing with overly affectionate types{{highlight|. H}}umans who rush up wanting to rub its belly and tug its ears{{highlight|... O}}r the packs of Puddlipups who swarm it the moment it looks away, lavishing licks on its tail{{highlight|&mdash;Nomnom bristles with fury. }}Surely these wretched humans and Anima must think I'm food! And yet, every so often, in the midst of deep sleep, Nomnom dreams of {{highlight|a towering}} ice cream cone sprinkled with jellybeans{{highlight|,}} rich {{highlight|in}} flavor. Unable to hold back, it bites once... and again... Then, with a howl, it wakes{{highlight|-}}only to find that the {{highlight|taste of sweetness was nothing more than}} its own tail, clutched tightly in its arms."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Nomnom has never been good at dealing with overly affectionate types{{highlight|: h}}umans who rush up wanting to rub its belly and tug its ears{{highlight|; o}}r the packs of Puddlipups who swarm it the moment it looks away, lavishing licks on its tail{{highlight|. "}}Surely these wretched humans and Anima must think I'm food!{{highlight|" Nomnom bristles with fury.}} And yet, every so often, in the midst of deep sleep, Nomnom dreams of {{highlight|an}} ice cream cone sprinkled with jellybeans {{highlight|and}} rich {{highlight|with}} flavor. Unable to hold back, it bites once... and again... Then, with a howl, it wakes{{highlight|...}} only to find the {{highlight|sweet taste came from}} its own tail, clutched tightly in its arms."
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