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** {{Color|Old:}} "Though {{Highlight|mushroom-}}like {{Highlight|in appearance}}, Mushgloomini is inedible. Active only at night, it {{Highlight|uses Dark spores to protect itself.}}"

** {{Color|New:}} "Though {{Highlight|it looks}} like {{Highlight|a mushroom}}, Mushgloomini is inedible. Active only at night, it {{Highlight|protects itself with Dark spores.}}"

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "Mushgloomini dares to appear only at night, yet it brims with longing and imagination for the daylight. To it, the sky is a vast jelly of many colors, the clouds soft candies drifting above. Rain is syrup from melting jelly, while the trees are towering lollipops. Only after a rainstorm does it step out of its comfort zone to {{Highlight|see}} that unfamiliar world for itself{{Highlight|-}}the temptation of sweets is simply too great. But soon, it sinks into a deep emptiness{{Highlight|:}} it cannot possess both the daylight and the feeling it has for the daylight. Such is the price of growing up."

** {{Color|New:}} "Mushgloomini dares to appear only at night, yet it brims with longing and imagination for the daylight. To it, the sky is a vast jelly of many colors, the clouds soft candies drifting above. Rain is syrup from melting jelly, while the trees are towering lollipops. Only after a rainstorm does it step out of its comfort zone to {{Highlight|cautiously explore and behold}} that unfamiliar world for itself {{Highlight|—}} the temptation of sweets is simply too great. But soon, it sinks into a deep emptiness{{Highlight|, for}} it cannot possess both the daylight and the feeling it has for the daylight. Such is the price of growing up."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Though {{Highlight|mushroom-}}like {{Highlight|in appearance}}, Mushgloomini is inedible. Active only at night, it {{Highlight|uses Dark spores to protect itself.}}"
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Though {{Highlight|it looks}} like {{Highlight|a mushroom}}, Mushgloomini is inedible. Active only at night, it {{Highlight|protects itself with Dark spores.}}"
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Mushgloomini dares to appear only at night, yet it brims with longing and imagination for the daylight. To it, the sky is a vast jelly of many colors, the clouds soft candies drifting above. Rain is syrup from melting jelly, while the trees are towering lollipops. Only after a rainstorm does it step out of its comfort zone to {{Highlight|see}} that unfamiliar world for itself{{Highlight|-}}the temptation of sweets is simply too great. But soon, it sinks into a deep emptiness{{Highlight|:}} it cannot possess both the daylight and the feeling it has for the daylight. Such is the price of growing up."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Mushgloomini dares to appear only at night, yet it brims with longing and imagination for the daylight. To it, the sky is a vast jelly of many colors, the clouds soft candies drifting above. Rain is syrup from melting jelly, while the trees are towering lollipops. Only after a rainstorm does it step out of its comfort zone to {{Highlight|cautiously explore and behold}} that unfamiliar world for itself {{Highlight|&mdash;}} the temptation of sweets is simply too great. But soon, it sinks into a deep emptiness{{Highlight|, for}} it cannot possess both the daylight and the feeling it has for the daylight. Such is the price of growing up."
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