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** {{Color|Old:}} "Marshalbird's plumage radiates arresting brilliance. In competition, it adheres to chivalric principles, guarding the medal-like {{highlight|feathers}} upon its nape as treasured regalia."

** {{Color|New:}} "Marshalbird's plumage radiates arresting brilliance. In competition, it adheres to chivalric principles, guarding the medal-like {{highlight|plumage}} upon its nape as treasured regalia."

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** {{Color|Old:}} "Before dueling, Marshalbird {{highlight|will spend some time considering this question}}: strike first, or {{highlight|offer a graceful}} salute? It {{highlight|will weigh the question carefully, looking at it from multiple angles, and draw}} on all its experience, {{highlight|yet it always reaches the same conclusion}}: the graceful salute. {{highlight|And}} each time afterward, it always feels a twinge of regret, for in its heart, however faintly, it hopes for its opponent to return the gesture. But this time {{highlight|feels}} different. {{highlight|Having studied}} this human for {{highlight|some time... Before the battle begins, a peculiar certainty rises within its chest with every beat of its wings. Maybe, just maybe, this time will be different}}."

** {{Color|New:}} "Before dueling, Marshalbird {{highlight|always takes a moment to ponder}}: strike first, or salute {{highlight|with grace}}? It {{highlight|weighs every angle, draws}} on all its experience, {{highlight|and each time arrives at the same answer}}: the graceful salute. {{highlight|Yet}} each time afterward, it always feels a twinge of regret, for in its heart, however faintly, it hopes for its opponent to return the gesture. But this time {{highlight|is}} different. {{highlight|It has been observing}} this human for {{highlight|so long... Just as it leisurely unfurls its wings before the battle, a sudden certainty settles over it: maybe, just maybe, the moment has arrived at last}}."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Marshalbird's plumage radiates arresting brilliance. In competition, it adheres to chivalric principles, guarding the medal-like {{highlight|feathers}} upon its nape as treasured regalia."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Marshalbird's plumage radiates arresting brilliance. In competition, it adheres to chivalric principles, guarding the medal-like {{highlight|plumage}} upon its nape as treasured regalia."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Before dueling, Marshalbird {{highlight|will spend some time considering this question}}: strike first, or {{highlight|offer a graceful}} salute? It {{highlight|will weigh the question carefully, looking at it from multiple angles, and draw}} on all its experience, {{highlight|yet it always reaches the same conclusion}}: the graceful salute. {{highlight|And}} each time afterward, it always feels a twinge of regret, for in its heart, however faintly, it hopes for its opponent to return the gesture. But this time {{highlight|feels}} different. {{highlight|Having studied}} this human for {{highlight|some time... Before the battle begins, a peculiar certainty rises within its chest with every beat of its wings. Maybe, just maybe, this time will be different}}."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Before dueling, Marshalbird {{highlight|always takes a moment to ponder}}: strike first, or salute {{highlight|with grace}}? It {{highlight|weighs every angle, draws}} on all its experience, {{highlight|and each time arrives at the same answer}}: the graceful salute. {{highlight|Yet}} each time afterward, it always feels a twinge of regret, for in its heart, however faintly, it hopes for its opponent to return the gesture. But this time {{highlight|is}} different. {{highlight|It has been observing}} this human for {{highlight|so long... Just as it leisurely unfurls its wings before the battle, a sudden certainty settles over it: maybe, just maybe, the moment has arrived at last}}."
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