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** {{Color|Old:}} This spirited unicorn {{Highlight|inscribes memories with its horn-as-inkbrush}}, leaving trails of ink in its wake.

** {{Color|New:}} This spirited unicorn {{Highlight|uses its horn as an ink brush to inscribe memories}}, leaving trails of ink in its wake.

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "Wherever the Inkicorn wanders, it leaves behind smoky{{Highlight|, cloudlike}} trails of ink that {{Highlight|curl}} like dragons through the {{Highlight|sky. For}} this, it {{Highlight|is}} often {{Highlight|regarded as}} an anti-academic artist. {{Highlight|Yet once, it too was obsessed}} with {{Highlight|creating more systematic works using}} its {{Highlight|unicorn-ink {{Sic|horn.But}} it soon discovered}} that bending {{Highlight|low to draw with its horn forced its head downward, its gaze fixed on}} the {{Highlight|ground. The posture}} was {{Highlight|neither graceful nor conducive to art. In the end,}} it chose to reconcile with itself{{Highlight|—at the very}} least, with its own spine."

** {{Color|New:}} "Wherever the Inkicorn wanders, it leaves behind smoky trails of ink that {{Highlight|look}} like dragons {{Highlight|soaring}} through the {{Highlight|clouds}}. {{Highlight|Because of}} this, it{{Highlight|'s}} often {{Highlight|called}} an anti- academic artist. {{Highlight|It actually used to try creating structured art}} with its horn{{Highlight|, but realized}} that bending {{Highlight|over only let it see}} the {{Highlight|dirt. Deciding that looking cool}} was {{Highlight|more important}}, it {{Highlight|finally reconciled}} with itself{{Highlight|... or}} at least, with its own spine."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} This spirited unicorn {{Highlight|inscribes memories with its horn-as-inkbrush}}, leaving trails of ink in its wake.
 ** {{Color|New:}} This spirited unicorn {{Highlight|uses its horn as an ink brush to inscribe memories}}, leaving trails of ink in its wake.
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Wherever the Inkicorn wanders, it leaves behind smoky{{Highlight|, cloudlike}} trails of ink that {{Highlight|curl}} like dragons through the {{Highlight|sky. For}} this, it {{Highlight|is}} often {{Highlight|regarded as}} an anti-academic artist. {{Highlight|Yet once, it too was obsessed}} with {{Highlight|creating more systematic works using}} its {{Highlight|unicorn-ink {{Sic|horn.But}} it soon discovered}} that bending {{Highlight|low to draw with its horn forced its head downward, its gaze fixed on}} the {{Highlight|ground. The posture}} was {{Highlight|neither graceful nor conducive to art. In the end,}} it chose to reconcile with itself{{Highlight|&mdash;at the very}} least, with its own spine."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Wherever the Inkicorn wanders, it leaves behind smoky trails of ink that {{Highlight|look}} like dragons {{Highlight|soaring}} through the {{Highlight|clouds}}. {{Highlight|Because of}} this, it{{Highlight|'s}} often {{Highlight|called}} an anti- academic artist. {{Highlight|It actually used to try creating structured art}} with its horn{{Highlight|, but realized}} that bending {{Highlight|over only let it see}} the {{Highlight|dirt. Deciding that looking cool}} was {{Highlight|more important}}, it {{Highlight|finally reconciled}} with itself{{Highlight|... or}} at least, with its own spine."
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