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** {{Color|Old:}} "Legends hold that Dragamour appears before couples bound by true love, leaving {{Highlight|behind}} its blessing {{Highlight|for}} their union."

** {{Color|New:}} "Legends hold that Dragamour appears before couples bound by true love, leaving its blessing {{Highlight|upon}} their union."

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "From afar, Dragamour watches a pair of human lovers. It lets out a joyous cry, wings beating furiously as it whirls through the sky in wild circles. Clutching its chest, it takes a deep breath—then soars upward into a 360° aerial roll, shrieking like a boiling kettle at full pitch. It reminds itself to stay calm, to remain graceful. With measured poise, it glides toward the couple, circling low, flipping and playing around them with abandon. At last, Dragamour bows low and spreads its wings wide, inviting them to climb onto its back. With them seated, it skims across the surface of the lake. It cries out again in delight, though its voice carries the faintest tremor."

** {{Color|New:}} "When Dragamour spots a couple in love, it simply can't contain itself. It erupts in a joyful shriek and tears across the sky in a dizzying spiral. After a quick breath, it launches into a spectacular backflip, whistling like a tea kettle at full boil. Reminding itself to be elegant, it approaches the couple, circling them with giddy, playful swoops. Finally, it dips low, offering its back for a romantic flight over the lake, its happy cry tinged with a faint, heartfelt tremor."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Legends hold that Dragamour appears before couples bound by true love, leaving {{Highlight|behind}} its blessing {{Highlight|for}} their union."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Legends hold that Dragamour appears before couples bound by true love, leaving its blessing {{Highlight|upon}} their union."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "From afar, Dragamour watches a pair of human lovers. It lets out a joyous cry, wings beating furiously as it whirls through the sky in wild circles. Clutching its chest, it takes a deep breath&mdash;then soars upward into a 360° aerial roll, shrieking like a boiling kettle at full pitch. It reminds itself to stay calm, to remain graceful. With measured poise, it glides toward the couple, circling low, flipping and playing around them with abandon. At last, Dragamour bows low and spreads its wings wide, inviting them to climb onto its back. With them seated, it skims across the surface of the lake. It cries out again in delight, though its voice carries the faintest tremor."
+** {{Color|New:}} "When Dragamour spots a couple in love, it simply can't contain itself. It erupts in a joyful shriek and tears across the sky in a dizzying spiral. After a quick breath, it launches into a spectacular backflip, whistling like a tea kettle at full boil. Reminding itself to be elegant, it approaches the couple, circling them with giddy, playful swoops. Finally, it dips low, offering its back for a romantic flight over the lake, its happy cry tinged with a faint, heartfelt tremor."
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Dragamour/Change History: Difference between revisions

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