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** {{Color|Old:}} "Cumulon {{Highlight|possesses}} excellent {{Highlight|vision}}; its spectacles are purely decorative, {{Highlight|as it believes this conjures a more imposing presence}}."

** {{Color|New:}} "Cumulon {{Highlight|has}} excellent {{Highlight|eyesight}}; its spectacles are purely decorative, {{Highlight|worn only to appear more imposing}}."

* Story was updated:

** {{Color|Old:}} "Cumulon possesses great wisdom. It can often be found in libraries, carefully poring over the greater part of the hefty times there. But in reality, it's completely illiterate. {{Highlight|But}} it is still wise nonetheless, for its wisdom is forged from {{Highlight|its experiences in life.}} After all, those humans who frequent libraries are assumed to be full of knowledge. A simple deduction, no? But Cumulon has its own struggles: As its eyesight is simply too good, it {{Highlight|often}} forgets to wear its glasses when it wakes in the morning."

** {{Color|New:}} "Cumulon possesses great wisdom. It can often be found in libraries, carefully poring over the greater part of the hefty times there. But in reality, it's completely illiterate. It is still wise nonetheless, for its wisdom is forged from {{Highlight|life experience:}} after all, those humans who frequent libraries are assumed to be full of knowledge. A simple deduction, no? But Cumulon has its own struggles: As its eyesight is simply too good, it {{Highlight|sometimes}} forgets to wear its glasses when it wakes {{Highlight|up}} in the morning."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Cumulon {{Highlight|possesses}} excellent {{Highlight|vision}}; its spectacles are purely decorative, {{Highlight|as it believes this conjures a more imposing presence}}."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Cumulon {{Highlight|has}} excellent {{Highlight|eyesight}}; its spectacles are purely decorative, {{Highlight|worn only to appear more imposing}}."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Cumulon possesses great wisdom. It can often be found in libraries, carefully poring over the greater part of the hefty times there. But in reality, it's completely illiterate. {{Highlight|But}} it is still wise nonetheless, for its wisdom is forged from {{Highlight|its experiences in life.}} After all, those humans who frequent libraries are assumed to be full of knowledge. A simple deduction, no? But Cumulon has its own struggles: As its eyesight is simply too good, it {{Highlight|often}} forgets to wear its glasses when it wakes in the morning."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Cumulon possesses great wisdom. It can often be found in libraries, carefully poring over the greater part of the hefty times there. But in reality, it's completely illiterate. It is still wise nonetheless, for its wisdom is forged from {{Highlight|life experience:}} after all, those humans who frequent libraries are assumed to be full of knowledge. A simple deduction, no? But Cumulon has its own struggles: As its eyesight is simply too good, it {{Highlight|sometimes}} forgets to wear its glasses when it wakes {{Highlight|up}} in the morning."
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 [[Version 0.3.0]]
 * Cumulon was added as a 5-Star Anima.

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