Old: "This young dog bears a sharp blade of bone upon its head, and loves to use lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs to hone its bone blade. It possesses a most stubborn personality, and its bones are uncommonly hard."
New: "This young pup has a sharp bone blade on its head and loves honing it against lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs. It is extremely stubborn, and its bones are exceptionally hard."
