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** {{Color|Old:}} "This young {{highlight|dog bears a sharp blade of bone upon its head, and loves to use}} lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs {{highlight|to hone its bone blade}}. It {{highlight|possesses a most stubborn personality}}, and its bones are {{highlight|uncommonly}} hard."

** {{Color|New:}} "This young {{highlight|pup has a sharp bone blade on its head and loves honing it against}} lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs. It {{highlight|is extremely stubborn}}, and its bones are {{highlight|exceptionally}} hard."

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** {{Color|Old:}} "Knocked down? Stand up again. Laughed at? Bite back. Doubted? Prove them wrong {{highlight|someday}}. This is Cublade's creed. It knows the {{highlight|cruelty of the world}}: if it cannot change others, then it must harden itself. Its bone blades are always scarred, but it {{highlight|doesn't despair}}. It knows that regrown {{highlight|bone becomes}} stronger, and it {{highlight|looks forward to}} the day {{highlight|when}} its blades are harder still. {{highlight|But deep down}}... Cublade {{highlight|longs}} for love. It remembers fondly every afternoon {{highlight|it charged}} toward its master {{highlight|with}} bread in {{highlight|its}} jaws, {{highlight|remembering the}} gentle, sunlit corner of a distant, quiet past."

** {{Color|New:}} "Knocked down? Stand up again. Laughed at? Bite back. Doubted? Prove them wrong {{highlight|later}}. This is Cublade's creed. It knows the {{highlight|world's cruelty by heart}}: if it cannot change others, then it must harden itself. Its bone blades are always scarred, but it {{highlight|feels no sorrow}}. It knows that regrown {{highlight|bones become}} stronger, and it {{highlight|awaits}} the day its blades are harder still. {{highlight|Yet beneath it all}}... Cublade {{highlight|secretly aches}} for love. It remembers fondly every afternoon {{highlight|of dashing}} toward its master{{highlight|,}} bread in jaws, {{highlight|and misses that}} gentle, sunlit corner of a distant, quiet past."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "This young {{highlight|dog bears a sharp blade of bone upon its head, and loves to use}} lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs {{highlight|to hone its bone blade}}. It {{highlight|possesses a most stubborn personality}}, and its bones are {{highlight|uncommonly}} hard."
 ** {{Color|New:}} "This young {{highlight|pup has a sharp bone blade on its head and loves honing it against}} lampposts, walls, and even Petrilogs. It {{highlight|is extremely stubborn}}, and its bones are {{highlight|exceptionally}} hard."
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "Knocked down? Stand up again. Laughed at? Bite back. Doubted? Prove them wrong {{highlight|someday}}. This is Cublade's creed. It knows the {{highlight|cruelty of the world}}: if it cannot change others, then it must harden itself. Its bone blades are always scarred, but it {{highlight|doesn't despair}}. It knows that regrown {{highlight|bone becomes}} stronger, and it {{highlight|looks forward to}} the day {{highlight|when}} its blades are harder still. {{highlight|But deep down}}... Cublade {{highlight|longs}} for love. It remembers fondly every afternoon {{highlight|it charged}} toward its master {{highlight|with}} bread in {{highlight|its}} jaws, {{highlight|remembering the}} gentle, sunlit corner of a distant, quiet past."
+** {{Color|New:}} "Knocked down? Stand up again. Laughed at? Bite back. Doubted? Prove them wrong {{highlight|later}}. This is Cublade's creed. It knows the {{highlight|world's cruelty by heart}}: if it cannot change others, then it must harden itself. Its bone blades are always scarred, but it {{highlight|feels no sorrow}}. It knows that regrown {{highlight|bones become}} stronger, and it {{highlight|awaits}} the day its blades are harder still. {{highlight|Yet beneath it all}}... Cublade {{highlight|secretly aches}} for love. It remembers fondly every afternoon {{highlight|of dashing}} toward its master{{highlight|,}} bread in jaws, {{highlight|and misses that}} gentle, sunlit corner of a distant, quiet past."
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