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** {{Color|Old:}} "Just as humans deem Chowpownd sweet and docile, it snaps open its cavernous maw, and attempts to devour everything within reach!"

** {{Color|New:}} "Just when people mistake Chowpownd for something sweet and harmless, it snaps open its cavernous maw and tries to swallow everything in sight!"

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** {{Color|Old:}} "People often mistake Chowpownd for being insatiable. But in {{highlight|truth}}, it {{highlight|is}} never hungry{{highlight|—Insatiability is its nature. From birth, Chowpownd can taste}} the flavor of all things. {{highlight|Indeed}}, it is a maverick synesthete: to {{highlight|it}}, jealousy tastes like rich frosting. It devours endlessly, seeking to confirm the essence of everything {{highlight|it consumes}}. And yet, Chowpownd remains perplexed{{highlight|:}} of all it has eaten, {{highlight|none has matched}} the flavor of love. {{highlight|To Chowpownd, love itself is}} the desire to consume all{{highlight|—to possess all. An eternal paradox}}. A small jest played by the {{highlight|Aspect upon it}}."

** {{Color|New:}} "People often mistake Chowpownd for being insatiable. But in {{highlight|reality}}, it never {{highlight|gets}} hungry{{highlight|. Chowpownd was born already knowing}} the flavors of all. {{highlight|In fact}}, it is a maverick synesthete: to {{highlight|Chowpownd}}, jealousy tastes just like rich frosting. It devours endlessly, seeking to confirm the essence of everything. And yet, Chowpownd remains perplexed{{highlight|, for}} of all it has eaten, {{highlight|nothing matches}} the flavor of love. {{highlight|This creates an eternal paradox, as love for Chowpownd is synonymous with}} the desire to consume all. A small jest played by the {{highlight|Aspects}}."

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 ** {{Color|Old:}} "Just as humans deem Chowpownd sweet and docile, it snaps open its cavernous maw, and attempts to devour everything within reach!"
 ** {{Color|New:}} "Just when people mistake Chowpownd for something sweet and harmless, it snaps open its cavernous maw and tries to swallow everything in sight!"
+* Story was updated:
+** {{Color|Old:}} "People often mistake Chowpownd for being insatiable. But in {{highlight|truth}}, it {{highlight|is}} never hungry{{highlight|&mdash;Insatiability is its nature. From birth, Chowpownd can taste}} the flavor of all things. {{highlight|Indeed}}, it is a maverick synesthete: to {{highlight|it}}, jealousy tastes like rich frosting. It devours endlessly, seeking to confirm the essence of everything {{highlight|it consumes}}. And yet, Chowpownd remains perplexed{{highlight|:}} of all it has eaten, {{highlight|none has matched}} the flavor of love. {{highlight|To Chowpownd, love itself is}} the desire to consume all{{highlight|&mdash;to possess all. An eternal paradox}}. A small jest played by the {{highlight|Aspect upon it}}."
+** {{Color|New:}} "People often mistake Chowpownd for being insatiable. But in {{highlight|reality}}, it never {{highlight|gets}} hungry{{highlight|. Chowpownd was born already knowing}} the flavors of all. {{highlight|In fact}}, it is a maverick synesthete: to {{highlight|Chowpownd}}, jealousy tastes just like rich frosting. It devours endlessly, seeking to confirm the essence of everything. And yet, Chowpownd remains perplexed{{highlight|, for}} of all it has eaten, {{highlight|nothing matches}} the flavor of love. {{highlight|This creates an eternal paradox, as love for Chowpownd is synonymous with}} the desire to consume all. A small jest played by the {{highlight|Aspects}}."
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